Autumn – Troiku

bare branches

a jungle gym for birds

wings all aflutter

 

bare branches                                                                   a painting against the blue sky
a painting against the blue sky                                          color drips to the ground
leaves under my feet                                                         gathering in piles

© Yozakura, the Wandering Spirit

leaves under my feet

a satisfying crunch

autumn symphony

 

© Caitiln Gramley

 

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This attempt at a troiku is in response to Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #31 Troiku … “bare branches”

A troiku starts with a base haiku, then you create three new haiku where each line of the base haiku is the first line in each of the new haiku.

I quite enjoyed learning this new form. 🙂

To learn more about troiku click HERE.

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13 thoughts on “Autumn – Troiku

    • Hi. Thanks for reading. It is an new form of haiku created by Chèvrefeuille over at Carpe Diem Blog. All the information is in the short description right under my poem with links to his blog site and a link to a detailed description of Troiku and how he came up with it. 🙂 Check it out and give it a try! 🙂

      • Thanks for the reply … I did not see the explanation 😅. It was a pleasure to read you, you have a fantastic blog. I invite you to mine, it’s in Spanish … but I also have a lot of texts in English, I hope you like it. A greeting .😊 😊

        • Already been taking a look at some of your posts. Google translate comes in handy. 🙂

          I’m glad you like my blog. Thanks for stopping by. Can I ask how you got here? I like knowing how people stumble across my blog. 🙂

          • if of course, I honestly arrive by chance … I saw that you had haiku poems .. And I stayed to take a look … And I liked what you write. It’s great to find people who have similar tastes 😊😊

              • Thank you very much … I hope we read to each other often. By the way, once a year, an entry in my blog with twelve texts of followers that I am getting to know around here, would you like to participate? If you want look for my entry “blogversario 2017” is in Spanish … But this year people from Greece, Ukraine, etc. are participating🤔

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